Lesson in Falling Over
If you practice falling over
You can become quite skilled.
Avoiding knees grazed,
Elbows skinned.
Of course, when you begin
You must, first place your trust
In one who is prepared
To care enough
To pick the pieces up.
Eventually, you will become,
Sufficiently adept to fall for fun,
Even when attended by
Inept yet trying strangers.
You will however, quickly learn
The danger of
Their slow to catch concern.
And that, if you persist
In going down,
They’ll be delighted to
Assist your fall,
With all the force
Their lack of love
Can give the shove
Which puts you down
For good.
©James Rainsford 2011
Posted as my contribution to One Shot Wednesday on 25th May 2011. Your views are very welcome and I'll try to respond to all who express an opinion. Please click on the comment tab below.
wow, this was an interesting one because the tone seemed lighter while the content was dark. i hope that makes sense. i really liked this one. unfortunately, i've known some who take pleasure in the fall of others. some of the most sinister people around, they are.
ReplyDeleteOnce too often a call of "wolf" can attract a deserving result beyond the perceived need! A clever overturn of an old cliche!
ReplyDeleteAmen, James! I have fallen, oh so many times, with the scars upon body, soul and heart to prove it. Often I have felt ghost hands pushing, and thought myself crazy until I seen the smirking faces as I pulled myself up! Thought this yet another fantastic write, that will be much shared and enjoyed...Thank you :)
ReplyDeleteThere's a lot of life wisdom required in learning how to fall, and you've written an excellent treatise on the art of it here. I love the well built crescendo to the final lines as much as the ending itself, with its jaundiced but oh so accurate squint.
ReplyDeleteNow this is a cautionary tale!
ReplyDeleteoh dear goddess. you've obviously met my ex!
ReplyDeleteenvy the moonmen
ReplyDeleteforever in fleet freefall
never impact earth
I ever love your work, James. Always amazing takeaways. I have a poem up and a link to a review-- would love your take on both when you have a minute. xxxj
ReplyDeleteLove this, the wisdom, the wry undertone. Universal truth.
ReplyDeletebravo.
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