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Tuesday, 19 June 2012


When the World Was


When the world was wish-full
there were walks which
always lead somewhere.

Going and coming back
was not as now
a circular event,
with forced purpose, but no point.
Each step extended boundaries,
when the world
was still small windowed
by the first frontiers.

© James Rainsford 2012




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12 comments:

  1. So much more big and adventurous indeed from just a simple walk and no rat race to go through.

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  2. it does seem there is less to explore, less sense of wonder.

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  3. Love wish-full and its dual meanings. Your poem reminds me why I love walking through more remote forests, those without paths or signs. I feel that I am going somewhere not simply following a direction someone else decided I should follow. Wonderful poem.

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  4. So hard to explain what it is to get older--you don't explain here, you illustrate--that solidifying of life into a worn groove...well, don't get me started or I'll maunder on like an old coot. ;_) Fine work, James.

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  5. This is so good, we need to wander and wonder. This round and round the 'track' of life just doesn't do the trick for me! Great write.

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  6. I relate very much to this piece about 'then and now,' in fact it describes perfectly where I find myself.(How strange you should know!) Beautifully written, well done James.

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  7. There was such an excitement to every excursion in our youth; but I still get thrilled at the idea of travel and newness. The idea of "seeing more" keeps me fired up. But I understood exactly within the way you wrote the poem..exactly what you meant.

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  8. Lovely write, James. Hard to accept that we are getting older and that things are changing...

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  9. Nice reflections ~ I feel the world is getting smaller now but nonetheless is still for me, exciting to explore ~

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  10. "when the world was
    still small windowed"

    A moving write.

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  11. Like the play of boundaries here, and what they define.
    Inside, outside, constraint, targets, lives;

    "...windowed
    by the first frontiers..."

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